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Don't worry little girl
I'm not so far
I'm just beside your cold empty bed
I'm between the papers of your private book inside your dresser
You never forget me
I know you think of me constantly
You know you want me
You always hide me in the dark
And keep me in the silence
Because you don't want nobody to know about me
Or about our bloody secret
Yes bloody..
You know you want to take me
You hear me calling for you
You like my sound when I fall on the ground like the fine steel I am
You want me to give you pain I know
Just pick me up
I promise
I will be gentle, slip softly
And fast, you won't feel the hard pain
You know you want to feel me cutting under each thin layer of your skin
Come on
Fill your filthy desire with me
I'm shiny with odd shape
Rusty with rotten blood stains on my edges
Sharp and all you want to comfort your dead soul with
Don't be scared, for all you want is to feel numb
And I can make you feel good and lost
As you are always walking confused in your own dark and cloudy world
And when you see those pretty little blood drips rolling rolling rolling..
Leaving long deep crimson lines behind
And when they drop on the ground
Splash
One after one
Then they start to run faster
Drip drip drip
As if you feel your life been shattered on the bathroom floor along with their every fall
Look what I can do to you
Silly silly broken heart
Look down at the beautiful and fresh wounds
Look at the tearing flesh within
Isn't it scary, yet good?
Now cry cry, now laugh, like the psycho you are
You can just open your skin again
And make all your sins and shames flow out of the cuts
All of them
Until your body is covered with regrets and burns
And the ugly past that will never leave your mind
Keeping it foggy and static
Now, just rest me on your skin, and stare
At the red picture we painted
Until your crying eyes feel sleepy and heavy
And just, hide me again back in your dresser...
I was a little confused for a title for this
This is just how I feel being said in my mind when I think about my razor that I'm hiding in my private book and putting it inside my dresser, don't wanna say much...

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MiriaGreyhaven Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
This is frighteningly accurate... 
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SaraSaeed95 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well thanks :)
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MiriaGreyhaven Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
My pleasure!
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Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool poem, i hope everything is ok. :hug:
you've got me if you need to talk okie?
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SaraSaeed95 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks Kai :)
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Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thats what friends are for!
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grimmzimm Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I understand all to well how you feel. This hits home for me for I am the same way.
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SaraSaeed95 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry you feel like that too..it's really hard
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grimmzimm Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yes, yes it is. Especially when you feel all alone. The hardest part for me, and most, is feeling so alone and ashamed to tell those that love them.
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SaraSaeed95 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel alone all my time, literally don't have friends anymore..it just kills me when I look for a hug and don't find anyone there, I never had real friends in real life
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